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@Seraphor said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2144012#Comment_2144012
I'd probably prefer it the other way, Chris and Jill with Nemesis as the characters, with legendary skins for Leon, Claire, Mr X, plus buff Chris and blonde Jill from 5.
So this as base with some individual options for head/chest/legs...
https://i.pinimg.com/474x/7c/c0/4e/7cc04ecaf859c9fd5f987c694a717992.jpg
Then these are full body skins:
What... in the hell... is Jill wearing, dude she looks like she came from a superhero comic, that's not RE at all! ( FYI I'm talking about the bottom image not the top one, the top one looks good.) I'm happy I never played RE 5, if that what the series was becoming, if I was playing a horror game looking like that, I wouldn't have been scared of Nemesis in the slightest. It makes me happy RE 7 existed in the first place
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We honestly don't truly know, hell the teaser could just be announcing the RE chapter and that's it. I do want the RE chapter to feature characters from the Old games, and the new games, giving something to all fans
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@JimboMason said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2143316#Comment_2143316
Pretty much (and I'm hoping between the three you listen)
Nemesis? I'll have a very mixed feeling, I mean Nemesis sets a pretty high bar
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@JimboMason said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/245716/so-if-claire-is-the-alleged-survivor
I don't think that the devs will do the same thing two times in a row, they like to spice things up a lot.
Agreed, what would be the point of using the same trick again. Hell, it could be Jack Baker, or Nemesis, MR. X there is a lot of choices
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At this point it could literally be anybody
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@miketheratguy said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2143213#Comment_2143213
I did three rituals last night and let all the survivors go. It felt nice. :)
See this is the kind of stuff I want to see
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@Phasmamain said:
You do realise people do this so they can piss people off enough to post on the forums right?
I'm wondering will there ever be someone who loses a game and is happy about it?
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@Beelzeboop said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2143028#Comment_2143028
Oh, sorry. I kinda thought that with the whole "protagonist dying" thing combined with the text at the end of the page that it seemed like it was over.
You never need to go for perfect. "Good enough" is really the goal. Improvements can be made from there if you want, but in the end striving for perfection is often counterproductive.
Yeah I get it, I wasn't going to leave the story like that without an idea of what the hell happened, plus the prologue is also to set up what is to come into Pinebrook so , but you mentioned that my pacing was kinda off ngl, but I should probably have improved upon it . The only reason Penny exists was to humanize Elliot, from my standpoint he was an absolute jackass to begin with, and I wanted to show that this character really wasn't a bad person always. But now reading what you read, I might just cut her at this point. I feel like she was the reason there was so much info to begin with. I might not cut her entirely though, I can reuse her later but she would have no connections to Elliot.
However Elliot's story isn't over yet, I've actually showed y'all what was gonna happen to him in the end even before it happened. Anyway the story will continue after the events of the prologue . If you don't mind I might share small tiny excerpts of the short stories to come but I'm not sure yet. You know what's funny is that I've basically foreshadowed what is to come in the next three short stories, using very small details, that flew over people's' head.
However I have to ask is there anything you liked about todays pages? I'll admit I could probably work on making the town, I didn't want to go to in depth of it by mostly allowing you to imagine it, but maybe I could've added a bit more.
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@SPRINGTRAP said:
Have Springtrap be Chapter 23.
After all 2023 was the year Fazbear's Fright was introduced in the lore.
Why would you necro a discussion?
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@Beelzeboop said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2142853#Comment_2142853
Wow, I would love to read this again after its edited.
On a critical note, Elliot seemed to just suddenly remember Penny with no prompting whatsoever just after something violent and horrible had happened. Something you need to remember is that when people are scared, their minds stay "in the moment," so it would take a strong cue to remind them of something, even a traumatic or important memory.
There's another thing I've wanted to point out for a long while, but I've never found an actually constructive or even truly effective way to say it. You know, no actual advice on it other than just "get better" or "practice." But, given that the prologue seems to be over, I kinda have to say it now. If this comes off as a little harsh, it's due to my failures, not yours.
You need to make sure that the story sort of... "flows," for lack of a better term. The way you write it, it seems like you're just trying to cram in all the information you need without paying much attention to how it impacts the tone. If you didn't know, text has a "pace," like any other media. Commas give a little speed bump, ellipses(...) bring it to a grinding halt, periods give a brief pause to let the reader take a moment to think or catch their breath, and run-on sentences cause acceleration.
If you want to sound breathless or tense, put in multiple sentences that communicate small amounts of information. That conveys a "logical" element, which human minds tend to default to when in pain, or when they are particularly relaxed. Do the opposite if you want it to sound overwhelmed with an emotion, like awe or terror or adoration.
Basically, what I'm trying to say is that you need to work on how you pace the text and the story. A general rule is to make the pacing look something like this:
https://us.v-cdn.net/6030815/uploads/513F2RK5DZQE/canvas-286-29.png
Sorry for my crappy mousewriting, I was doing this f a s t.
You can have as many "humps" as you want, but in general the more of them you have, the more complex the story. In Pinebrook, I would suggest at least three. In general, the wavy line should look fairly uniform, going up and down, getting slightly higher as it goes on, and peaking at the climax.
The "status quo" is where the story starts. The default state of the world, if you will. At the end of the story, everything should have either returned to an altered state of normal, or an entirely new form of normality should be established in it's place. If there is no change, all of the events of the story are meaningless in context. Unless, of course, the story exists to set up events for a future story.
I'm not sure if any of that was actually helpful, or if you already knew all of that.
Anyway, I'm really hoping to see more from you in the future. I'll be keeping an eye out for your work.
Remember, no matter what you write, you'll always have a fan in me. And I will
always
be
watching
you
Yeah I absolutely suck at pacing, and knowing when to cram info in stories. The problem is that I want to keep the prologue short, and good, all the more while setting up the story and themes of what is to come into Pinebrook, but... your right I need to work on it. Honestly I don't know if I can make this perfect, I will try but I don't want to make the a story each 90 ######### pages. Also this isn't the end of the prologue there's like three more pages, maybe four or five, to get to the damn point and make it perfect.
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2142853#Comment_2142853
You should probs work on your schoolwork now, seems like you worked really hard on this, well done! Also, poor Elliot, he didn't deserve that.
Wait, I WAS RIGHT ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED TO JULIE! I... I think?
Yeah you were I just wanted to rewrite it so it wasn't as cruel as it was originally, and so I didn't have people question my sanity, but this isn't the final page for the prologue
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Well I spent most of my time instead of doing school work to instead write these two pages. I hope you all enjoy and this one starts off differently then before since I will edit the last page where Julie was instead dragged off, and have that excerpt done sorta off screen. But I want to thank all of you, this has been an amazing bit to write and I hope you all enjoy @Beelzeboop , @QwQw , @glitchboi , @GoobyNugget , here you guys go.
Elliot nearly wanted to vomit of remembering Penny, he felt nauseous as the bits of what was left of his sub nearly came out if it hadn't already. " Okay just get out of here, she's no one." Elliot lied He never felt so sick, and shocked, sure Julie got what she deserved he believed that but he expected a bit more vial end. Instead, she was dragged off, and out of the room. It felt like an eternity before Elliot could muster the strength to exit, but stopped realizing he needed a weapon. With his small trusty flashlight, returned it on. To his shock, there wasn't much in the janitor. He spotted a trench shovel, he walked over to pick it up. " Has a bit of heft, it'll do".
He exited the closet. " Oh Lord in heaven." He squinted at the rotten guts of the Rhodies. The smell was worse like rotten eggs but he could almost taste it as well. Suddenly another aroma, caught his attention, one he was to familiar with. "Smoke". He coughed as he saw a decent vapor of it leave through a door in a room down the hall, Elliot exited the room where there were a bunch of broken down bits of wood and saw a trail of smoke where Julie was dragged off, he could hear commotion inside the room . Elliot covered his mouth as there were noises of struggle were made clear, he could here Julie screaming for her life, it brought him memories of Penny.
He remembered her, Penny Hewitt a beautiful and kind woman. She wasn't as drop dead gorgeous as the girls in the magazines were, but unlike them she was real, and the only woman that Elliot truly loved. Elliot tried not to shed a tear, but he still coughed at the smoke that was in the air. Suddenly the sounds of struggle stopped, he heard the stomping of the floor as the Furnace thing marched out of the room. It moaned as its molten orange glow beamed in the smoke like area. Elliot held to what was left of his breath, it was suffocating, he felt like he was in a small box and if he moved something would happen.
The Furnace thing, marched around the area, with its ax in its right hand. The chains rattled with every step, they were like ringing bells. The monsters eyes were like a lighthouse that pierced the smoke. Elliot wanted to fight this thing, but apart of him told not to. He didn't even know what the hell this thing is, an idea popped in his head. I just need to get out of here, maybe I can break one of the windows and hop out, there wasn't a window in that room, what about the one behind.... Elliot thought. He stopped realizing that to know for sure there was window, he would have to sneak past the monster. He inhaled the bad air, and began to make his way to the room.
Elliot quietly crawled with his shovel in hand behind The Furnace thing, he dared not breathe, he dared not flinch. The monster towered over him as he was less than 10 feet away from it, as it marched, Elliot felt the floor shake slightly. He didn't dare to look at it, and wanted to pretend the monster didn't exist. Elliot noticed that this was the first time he felt this much heat since he arrived. For what felt like an eternity Elliot finally crawled past it, but then his shovel knocked into a metal sounding object that Elliot presumed, was a tin can. The noise echoed throughout the hall, and the Furnace Thing stopped.
His eyes widened, the hairs on his neck stood, as he began to shiver as he began to drip cold sweat. "Oh #########." Elliot whispered. He turned around and saw the Furnace Things' head turned and stared dead center at Elliot. He immediately stood up and pounded his feet against the floorboards as hard he could. The Furnace Thing began marching over to Elliot, its footsteps pounding against the floor. Elliot didn't look back as he ran straight for the door slamming it, and hoping there was a window. To his luck there was, and the now bloodied corpse of what happened to Julie as a large tear in her groin was made known.
Elliot with his shovel smashed against the glass, it shattered against the shovel. He peered out and saw a decent drop less then ten feet, suddenly a slam came against the door as a growl of the monster came from outside of it. With no choice Elliot hopped out cutting his leg in the process and landed on the ground outside of the town hall. He didn't care about the pain he wanted to live! Elliot stood up and was in awe of the town, it had changed all of it. " What the ######### is wrong with this town!?" He bellowed
The town no longer had only brick buildings, but building made up entirely of wood, some even sported a cross symbol. The streets now appeared run down and cobbled as blood and other liquid substances were splattered across the floors. The sky was brighter then before and had a greyish glow to it, as a group of goose flew across the sky chirping away. Elliots attention reverberated back at The Furnace thing as it roared loudly out of the room , it jumped out and landed near feet away from Elliot. " ######### you!" Elliot screamed as he swung his shovel at its head.
With one good whack the shovel smacked The Furnace thing across the head, and the monsters' head moved only a few inches, it didn't even stumble back. Elliot's eyes widened in fear , as it turned back to face him, in a flash it punched Elliot in the face, the blown sent him stumbling back and nearly falling over. The Furnace thing marched towards Elliot with ax in hand and raised it high to cleave him. But he quickly recovered as landed a blow at its chest this time it flinched back as it groaned. Elliot got up and shoved the shovel directly into its left breast, it cried in pan.
" Take that you fiery bastard!" He cried, the monster grabbed the handle to Elliot surprise, and began twisting the wooden handle breaking it. The Furnace thing grabbed the head of it out of its chest and through it to the ground, it growled and charged at Elliot. He tried to turn to the side but thing grabbed him by the beard and threw him forward to the floor , tearing at one of his hairs. Elliot cried in anguish, and raised his hands begging for mercy, but in a swift strike it landed directly on his stomach, as he felt what could be described was and extremely aching painful hit that burned tremendously.
"P-Penn...Y, help me." He futilly called for help for his former lover. From the wound a flame arouse setting both his clothes on fire but also him. Elliot screamed as his plastic boots melted at his feet combing them, his clothes joined in, his hair and beard lit a blaze as well. Elliot felt not only extreme pain, but also a great amount of rage, it was so great it shook his whole body. It felt like his soul was being torn apart, from the inside, he wish he could redo it all, make up what he did to Penny. Elliot felt guilt for what he'd done to Penny, as another wave of excruciating pain, the world began to go dark. The pain was still there only this time it intensified as he felt what was left of his strength shattered.
The Furnace thing lifted up the ax out of his stomach and began to walk off. Elliot by some miracle was still alive but not for longer. "P-Pen...ny, b..baby, I'm...so s-s-sorry." Elliot stuttered as tears enveloped his eyes. Elliot remembered when he had a deep love for Penny, he remembered how they met, the love they shared. However it was not meant to be for Elliot cared more about his drinking and other pleasantries then Penny, he left her only for her to contact him that she was pregnant. Elliot didn't want a child, nor did he want to pay for it, but knowing the fact that she worked at a church school he schemed to make sure she would get rid of the child. Elliot blackmailed her in aborting the child, or he will tell her boss that she was pregnant, the good sir wouldn't allow something like that allowed. Eventually Penny did abort the child, she grew depressed and committed suicide, leaving Elliot a loner. With one final breathe Elliot closed his eyes as he laid his on the ground, to be at peace, but in this town, he will never know peace...
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@Beelzeboop said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2142381#Comment_2142381
I mean, they seem pretty competent. I've definitely seen how good and bad mods can be, and the forum mods seem to be in the average-good area.
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2142351#Comment_2142351
My sentiments exactly.
Its not that their bad people, lets just say I have tenuous relationship with them
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I'd say you need to learn how to use the killers power and perks, try and go for a strategy and hope you get lucky with the survivors
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I think Alien would be cooler, but they are very unlikely but Predator seems more action based then horror based. I'm honestly split in the middle
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@QwQw said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2142364#Comment_2142364
I highly doubt the mods will do anything to us.
I mean, we're the good guys in this situation. We haven't done anything wrong.
Well it's not as simple as that, I can't really shame them but, they aren't the best people, they are to an extent friendly however. I really can't talk about it tho
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My first Dlc, I would say was Curtian call before Clowns rework, honestly I thought he was amazing and i don't regret getting him at all
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@QwQw said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2142342#Comment_2142342
I know in the end it probably isn't that big of a deal, but as I said before, I just really hate bullies.
Oh I get that and I do to, however... I am more scared of the mods wrath then of that idiot
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@QwQw said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2141509#Comment_2141509
Exactly!
If anyone wants to get to Dabihwow, they're gonna have to go through me.
I can't ######### stand bullies, especially the online kind that hide behind their shield of anonymity.
It's okay if they want to give constructive criticism to Pinebrook, but calling it a Silent Hill ripoff and ######### without giving anything constructive is just a dick move.
I'd like to see them try and write their own story, and then we'll see just how "#########" Dabihwow's work is.
Not to mention, it's never okay to give a death threat to someone. That's just ######### up.
Don't worry he isn't worth #########, but don't worry he doesn't know me and I don't know them, I really don't want to make it into an absolute huge deal, the guy was just being a prick for the sake of it.
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@SnakeSound222 said:
He was one of the cooler parts of RE6 so I'd be down for it. He probably wouldn't be too high on the priority list though considering the reception to 6.
It wouldn't suprise me if it was, sure he was cool but I think we'll only get one thing from RE 6. I would think maybe the classics or even RE 7 might get a lot of attention then 6 or 5,
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@Beelzeboop said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2141458#Comment_2141458
I'm actually grinding my teeth a little bit right now.
Even if that were true, it wouldn't be worth making such a huge deal about it. There is literally no excuse in my mind for telling someone they should kill themselves.
No work of art is worth anyone's life. I don't care who's life, and I don't care what piece of art.
A piece of art is either an expression of skill or a medium to communicate. That's all. Either way, it's about the artist, even if it doesn't seem like it. God, it would take an entire ######### TED talk to explain this adequately.
But in the end, the issue is that art is information, and thinking beings (which are exclusively humans) collect and compile that information, and if a human can even potentially produce multiple pieces of art in the course of their lifetime, that is solid proof that living human beings are far more important than any piece of art. And if all human beings are created equal, then the wrongness of "disrespecting" a piece of art becomes as bad as "disrespecting" a TV screen full of static.
It's like destroying a computer because it didn't exactly match the aesthetic of the hard drive you have.
And that's not even getting into complex concepts like morality. That's just logic.
It's fine to take inspiration from something, as long as it doesn't hurt the creator of said something. The fact that someone can be so foolish to think that it's okay to do something like what you described sickens me.
If you're reading this, whoever the hell you are, if you have an issue with Dabihwow, you talk about it here. On this forum. In front of me.
If you want to make an attack, be prepared for a fight. And you'd better know what you're doing.
You have no excuse, but if you wanna bully my friend, you'd better start coming up with some. Because I sure as hell don't need one.
Don't worry, he didn't intimidate me a whole lot, he did unnerve me, but I'm ok, and I wholeheartedly agree. Art is just that, art. Its never meant to be perfect, art in a way tells you about the kinda person you are, or at least describes how you view it. But what saddens me is that the person is failing to realize is that I'm making a Pinebrook so I can pay tribute to Silent Hill, and bring back a similar horror it brought, sure maybe not as exact but I'm making it in a similar way.
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2141458#Comment_2141458
What the ######### is wrong with them
Like, what the ACTUAL #########?
Sorry you had to go through that, don't listen to that prick.
It's fine, I don't treat death threats online all that seriously, unless you actually know me, and where I live. I am very hard to intimidate at times, they did strike a nerve but, I was like " eh, ######### em." I'm used to it, bu its still not okay
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Okay, I just had one of the worst experiences creating Pinebrook, someone who looked at my work here on the forums just so happened to run into me in-game. He spoke to me off the game about my work, at first I thought it was a fan, but then he told me that Pinebrook is just a ######### version of Silent Hill. He then ranted how on and on how I'm going to create a terrible version of a masterpiece that was called silent HIll, to the point of even death threatening me. I reported him and left it at that, but still, it was scary, and unsettling to hear negativity to that extent, I'm fine though, and I'll admit it Pinebrook was inspired by Silent Hill. It was meant to be from the beginning
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Sanic
fixiated:sprintburst, urban evasion, and any other perk
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@Gay_Police_Dept said:
yeah, to get laid.
Isn't that on everyone's bucket list?
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I just want it be good, unique, maybe a new game mechanic here and there, but something to make up for the 'chapters', and "events"
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@QwQw said:
I love these random ass shower-thought like threads you sometimes post.
Same
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@RyRapsYT said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/245207/should-i-be-proud
how good were the survivors?
Really good three red ranks, one purple rank
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@GoodBoyKaru said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2136089#Comment_2136089
if you think i can successfully organise a completely free tournament on zero budget despite needing lots of anti-cheat measures, backup plans, people to commentate and others to spectate, organise teams and come up with a format that works, create a viable banlist, create a viable ruleset, and more, all within a day, while balancing college and a part-time job then lower your expectations of me substantially.
if i ever do decide to do it, it'd be months at the earliest.
If you need help let one of us know don't put on all yourself,
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Ah, maybe not this weekend though I have work
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@ALostPuppy said:
Even Almo said himself that he doesn't know why Freddy is "OP and needs nerfing, just that he does need one" (this isn't word for word the quote but something very similar). And it's clear they still have no idea why people dislike this killer being the way that he is because the changes address literally none of the issues people have. All it does is make him less appealing to play than before.
It's bizarre that they're still a ######### MILE away from hitting the mark sometimes when all the information is given to them from us on a silver platter.
It makes me wonder what are they actually doing while working at Bhvr
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@QwQw said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2135958#Comment_2135958
I may not have a Discord, but I can still play dbd with you guys.
sure
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@Aneurysm said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2135920#Comment_2135920
It doesn't carry over with me, I can play blight fine but billy and oni no
Strangely it carried over for me
@SunderMun said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2135920#Comment_2135920
Blight and Oni best bois <3
yeah they are best
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@GoodBoyKaru said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2134886#Comment_2134886
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2134878#Comment_2134878
DBD forums tournament, hosted by GoodBoyKaru and moderated by... People.
Aim of the tournament: whoever laughs loudest while playing wins
what time?
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2135941#Comment_2135941
Personally I don't use the J-flick, I don't mind Blights using it. It requires a mouse with the ability to switch DPI on the run. Basically you hold your DPI increase button, move your mouse left or right, then lunge and keep holding the direction you were going for.
Wait why did I type in a J-flick guide
######### take it down!
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2135934#Comment_2135934
Indeed. He's a super fun killer, maybe even my favorite or second favorite.
Same, however people constantly complain about the J-flick, which I don't personally do, hell I don't even know I can do it.
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2135920#Comment_2135920
A fellow Blight main I see!
Your one too?
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@supersonic853 said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2135920#Comment_2135920
But did you know if you wanna down an entire team even faster try oni with topknot and infectious fright monitor and abuse! Down all 4 survivors in a matter of 30 seconds for free at no cost to you! Call 1-800-dats-a-oni.
Oh I know that, and Oni is one of the strongest killers, poor Billy, he basically outclassed
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I got Adept Billy last night, and I was able to down a whole group in matter of minutes. But I do agree Bubba is better, the only reason i was able to win as Billy was because I'm a Blight main and I'm really good at blight but that's it. I do think He didn't deserve to be gutted to such a degree,
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Dang you beat me to it
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Yeah we can all agree on something for once
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@Beelzeboop said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2134019#Comment_2134019
*Slow clap of approval*
I knew you would like this, but I need to get the name out about this first
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@QwQw said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133967#Comment_2133967
Alright then, I'll keep the smoke. Honestly it's such an awful way to die as @Beelzeboop said.
Now this could just be me, but I also think it's eerie how he uses smoke, because in symbolizes that Furnace Head isn't even bothering to use it's full strength. "Where there's smoke there's fire." Furnace Head can't be even be bothered to use actual fire to kill it's victims, but instead just uses the smoke spawned from it.
I agree, but using smoke wouldn't be its full power, if FH used his full power, it would tear his body apart, thus killing him. That is why their are straps of metal all over his body, its to symbolize the fact that anger can't fully be contained in a human body forever, keeping our anger pent up can actually harm us mentally, and it needs to be released. Thus FHs' anger can kill him
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@QwQw said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133945#Comment_2133945
Nope, still don't have a Discord.
Maybe it's because I am just not a social person, but I never felt the need to have one. The few friends I do have I talk to through texting or Xbox Live.
Ah that's understandable, I get that, honestly though, your a pretty good person to socialize with
@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133981#Comment_2133981
Aw okay, it's alright.
THat doesn't mean i'll never be able to just not around noon time is what I'm saying
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133945#Comment_2133945
Aw, hopefully they get Discord sometime. Also hell yeah, this weekend would be awesome! I would love to make friends on here, y'know?
Uh sorry but change of plans I just now found out I am needed at a festival for my dads business, I'm really sorry but I found out I will be out around afternoon times like one o clock maybe so I might be able to come then
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@Beelzeboop said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133724#Comment_2133724
The reason I thought smoke would be interesting is because of how nightmarish suffocation is. Suffocation is among the worst ways to die, and the most common cause of death during building fires.
I think it works excellently for horror in particular because of the fact that humans have a visceral, painful reaction to it if they have even the slightest bit of empathy. It was actually the inspiration for the line "You were a person once. But now, all you are is screaming."
Plus, it leaves no actual wounds, so people can't say that you were just going for shock value without citing any actual reason for it.
If BHVR wanted Pinebrook for whatever reason, I trust that you would make them suffer for it, and force them to deal with longstanding issues. If they ever come talk to you or something, I want you to make some serious demands, with the excuse of not wanting to soil your brand on something as low-quality as DbD, and that they'll have to make some improvements if they want to utilize your work.
I read what you wrote on my wall, and I think that was the best way to handle it. It's hard to write directly about certain subjects without people thinking that you're fetishising them or treating them too lightly.
Indecency goes best with the technique of leaving things out. You'll find more about that under the trope "Nothing Is Scarier" on TVTropes.
Speaking of which, there's an index on horror tropes, which has helped me out a lot in the past. I suggest you take a look. Even better, if you scroll down on trope pages, you can see a section called "examples," which lists examples in various works from different forms of media, so give that a look.
Also, even though you aren't writing a game, I think this page could help:
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/WriteASurvivalHorrorGame
Now that I think about it, I actually like the idea of adding claustrophobia, @QwQw , forget what i said earlier keep the smoke although maybe not have it to where its such a severe effects maybe.
Yeah if Bhvr Comes after my liscense I will raise Hell, its one thing to take inspiration off of someone elses works but its another to literally steal it from the said owner. I do agree I would like adjustments done to the game to fit the chapter, I want to make sure that FH or whoever I choose to be the killer is both fun, strong, yet balanced. As for cosmetics if they want to add them I'll allow legendary sets of certain character from the series to be added. I want a map that is likeable and just as scary as Midwich.
Yeah that's why I'm gonna change it, I think its better that I do, that plus I'll look at the tropes later when I have time
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133915#Comment_2133915
Definitely Discord, I think since we're all gamers here (I think?) we should all have Discord.
Sadly @QwQw doesn't ( sorry buddy don't mean to call you out, although let me know if that has changed). But yeah we should all hang out sometime maybe a weekend or something but... we do need a host
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133876#Comment_2133876
Unfortunately it would be a bit difficult to get the show started. We need someone to host it D:
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm... I know I guy/gal or two on the forums, that can provide us these. ( tbh the only ones I can think of is Karu, Yords, Boss, MadlordJack, and uh you as well) the better question is should it be through discord or or zoom
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133834#Comment_2133834
Spectating the forum members would be hella fun
Oh boy we need to get this show on the road then
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@glitchboi said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/2133681#Comment_2133681
Speaking of which, a KYF with forum members playing and spectating would be pretty fun.
I'd like that, I wanna see what some of ya'll got,