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Grammatical errors and feedback to the spellings of both Aurora & Judgment's lores

Smoe Smoe
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All marked words and sentences needs to be corrected.

JUDGMENT'S LORE

  • “Citites” should be “cities”.
  • “Judgement” should be “Judgment” instead, to keep it consistent with the Killer's title.
  • “Built the first shine“ should be “built the first shrine“
  • “Repeated heresies“ should be “repeated acts of heresy“ instead. While the former is technically not incorrect, the latter just reads better.
  • “Away form those“ should be “away from those“
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AURORA'S LORE

  • “Vowed all“ should be “vowed that all“ instead. While the former is technically not incorrect, the latter just reads better.
  • Just like above with Judgment's lore. "Judgement" should be "Judgment" instead in Aurora's lore as well, in order to keep it consistent with the Killer's title.
  • "Terra Primus have dared seek the power of the Gods" should be "Terra Primus have dared to seek the power of the Gods." instead.
  • "the sentio-circutry of the people fell dormant." should be "the sentio-circuitry of the people fell dormant." instead.
  • "she beheld ruin where Ultracapitalis had stood." should be "she beheld the ruin of where Ultracapitalis had stood." instead.
  • "for they had been her family since she renounced mother, and father and took on the name of Stardotter." should be "for they had been her family, ever since she had disowned her mother and father, and took on the name of Stardotter." instead.
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Comments

  • pidgeon pidgeon

    Today I learned: Judgement is NOT how you spell the Judgments name

  • Wezqu Wezqu

    Might be a good idea to post this in the betahub bug reports might get fixed faster than here.

    https://app.betahub.io/projects/pr-5642738318

  • NeverSolus NeverSolus

    @Smoe said:

    All marked words and sentences needs to be corrected.

    JUDGMENT'S LORE

    • “Citites” should be “cities”.
    • “Judgement” should be “Judgment” instead, to keep it consistent with the Killer's title.
    • “Built the first shine“ should be “built the first shrine“
    • “Repeated heresies“ should be “repeated acts of heresy“ instead. While the former is technically not incorrect, the latter just reads better.
    • “Away form those“ should be “away from those“

    https://us.v-cdn.net/6030815/uploads/LET8CCJGEJXP/judgment.png

    AURORA'S LORE

    • “Vowed all“ should be “vowed that all“ instead. While the former is technically not incorrect, the latter just reads better.
    • Just like above with Judgment's lore. "Judgement" should be "Judgment" instead in Aurora's lore as well, in order to keep it consistent with the Killer's title.
    • "Terra Primus have dared seek the power of the Gods" should be "Terra Primus have dared to seek the power of the Gods." instead.
    • "the sentio-circutry of the people fell dormant." should be "the sentio-circuitry of the people fell dormant." instead.
    • "she beheld ruin where Ultracapitalis had stood." should be "she beheld the ruin of where Ultracapitalis had stood." instead.
    • "for they had been her family since she renounced mother, and father and took on the name of Stardotter." should be "for they had been her family, ever since she had disowned her mother and father, and took on the name of Stardotter." instead.

    https://us.v-cdn.net/6030815/uploads/UAPYI9YYHQOV/aurora.png

    You do the good work.

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