Stains of Grief - Chapter Concept
The cruelty of grief can go on those who deserve or not.
New Killer: The Scavenger
Name: Unknown
Alias: Resurrected Solider
Gender: Male
Nationality: Polish
Power: Remnant of the Lost
Power Attack Type: Boomerang Throw
Weapon: Self-made Sickle
Terror Radius: 32m
Movement Speed: 4.6m/s
Height: Tall
Power: Remnant of the Lost
After being through Sensory Deprivation, Scavenger's presense has dimmed and also he mastered boomerang throws and expanded the efficiency of wooden weapon, by creating boomerang blade, which makes it lethal.
Special Attack: Boomerang Throw
You start the trial with 3 tokens. Press and hold the power button to charge up (takes 1 second to charge up), once it's ready, press the attack button to use 1 token and throw the boomerang blade forward that starts homing to nearby survivors after time for limited distance.
If Boomerang Blade hits Survivor, it returns to Scavenger with the path that blade has traveled.
If Boomerang Blade doesn't hit Survivor or hits an obstacle while homing, it returns to Scavenger with the path that blade has traveled as well.
If you have less than 3 tokens, you can refiil them at lockers.
Homing Detection: 8 metre range
Travel Distance: 32 metre range
Boomerang Speeds:
"Throw State" : 18.4 m/s (persists only for 1 second and cannot start homing.)
"Post-Throw State": 6.9 m/s (after "Throw State" blade can only travel 32 metres and can start homing.)
Special Ability: Calm Before Storm
Every Survivor that is within your Terror Radius will have their Vision Distorted and The sky will Darken.
When the Power Gauge is full, everyone will get global Audio cue and The sky will darken for a split second. (It's similiar to The Dredge's Nightfall.)
Activation threshold: 300 Charges
Number of injured or dying Survivors in Trial:
4 Survivors: +4 c/s
3 Survivors: +3 c/s
2 Survivors: +2 c/s
1 Survivor: +1 c/s
0 Survivors: +0.25 c/s
Hitting a Survivor with a Basic Attack: +20 Charges
Hitting a Survivor with a Special Attack: +20 Charges
Hooking a Survivor: +20 Charges
Nearing Activation threshold: 100%
Transition time to Storm: 3 seconds
Discharging threshold: 60 Charges
Discharge rate: -1 c/s
Transition time to Daytime: 1.5 seconds
Once it's ready, press and hold the secondary power button for 3 second to unleash the lightning, which destroys all dropped pallets and damages 3 most progressed generators by 10%, if survivors were working on those generators, the healthy ones will get injured and the injured ones will be inflicted with deep wound.
After the lightning strike, The Storm will begin, causing the sky to completely darken (not as dark as The Dredge's Nightfall) and breaking each dropped pallet after 3 seconds that was dropped for 60 seconds.
Killer Add-ons:
Common Add-ons:
1.Dry Rubble: The handful of Rubble which made Simon never return to his destroyed home.
- While in Storm, Survivors suffer from Blindness Status Effect.
2.Prototype Boomerang: A prototype of the first boomerang blade, it almost didn't failed the test.
- Increases the "Post-Throw State" Boomerang Speed by 0.3 m/s.
3.Strong Rope: The Rope covered in Dust, it's made from good quality Fiber.
- Increases the Homing Detection range by 4 metres.
4.Wooden Ruler: Ruler of the owner's son found on his desk, it was made from oak wood.
- Increases the Travel Distance Range by 8 metres.
Uncommon Add-ons:
1. 54mm Bullet: A bullet that was found on Battlefields.
- Increases the "Throw State" Boomerang Speed by 0.6 m/s.
2. Gun Sheath: A leather gun sheath that was found on the owner's belt, owner found out later that gun had no use.
- Start the Trial with 4 Power Tokens.
3. Piece of Bread: An old piece of bread that "Resurrected Solider" used to eat in the Youth during the Occupation.
- While in Storm, Crows starled by survivors within 32 meters alert you with a Loud Noise Notification.
4. Solid Tar: Pebbles of the tar which were found on Battlefields, it almost sticks to the hand.
- Boomerang Blade inflicts Hindered (5%) Status Effect for 15 seconds.
5. Ushanka: The Ushanka that provided heat during first World War.
- Decreases the time to unleash the lightning by 0.5 seconds.
Rare Add-ons:
1. Bottle of "Alcohol": A glass bottle which contains a exhausting substance.
- Boomerang Blade inflicts Exhausted Status Effect for 5 seconds.
2. Freshly Sharpened Blade: The first prototype blade that was used for research on making Boomerang Blade.
- Boomerang Blade inflicts Haemorrhage and Mangled Status Effect.
3. Ripped Trachea: The Trachea that was ripped from owner's neck, a message of incoming danger.
- Increases the duration of The Storm by 20 seconds.
4. Opium Leftovers: An Opium leftovers found on Plymouth coast, once inhaled, there's a chance of becoming addicted to it.
5. Severed Hand: A left hand that belonged to "Resurrected Solider", it was found during wedding catastrophe.
- Reduces Reload time at Lockers by -25%.
Very Rare Add-ons:
1. Broken Jaw: The Jaw that once belonged to a Bride, it didn't ended well.
- Increases the Regression rate to 15%.
- Decreases the Number of generators being damaged by 1.
2. Fresh Rose: A rose that Groom was supposed to give it to Bride when everything has ended.
- While in Storm, the time to break a pallet after it was dropped is decreased by 1.5 seconds.
"You've Ruined my life... and future!"- The Owner
3. Santa Music Box: A music box that helped "Resurrected Solider" calm down, when he was a child.
- While in Storm, you are granted with Undetectable Status Effect.
"My Beloved..."- "Resurrected Solider"
4. Step Runner: A plant that is blown by the wind, the omen of upcoming storm.
- Increases the Passive Charge rate for Calm Before Storm by 75% per second.
Ultra Rare Add-ons:
1. Family Painting: A painting that presents five family members which are happy together.
- While in Storm, the Action speeds for breaking Breakable Walls and Pallets, damaging Generators, and vaulting Windows are Increased by +50%.
- Decreases the Duration of The Storm by 20 seconds.
"Look at you, you killed yourself and your family..." - "Resurrected Solider"
2. Iridescent Boomerang: A reflective replica of perfect boomerang molded from The Fog itself. When you focus enough, it shows the faces of the dead that were killed by it. Fills the user with Determination.
- When the Boomerang Blade successfully hits survivor, you instantly get the Boomerang Blade back.
"I feel no regrets on what you lost, I felt the same what you are feeling right now." - "Resurrected Solider"
Killer Perks:
HIDE N' SEEK
Screams, Cries, Fear, that's what you experienced. Now it's your foe's turn.
When Survivors stay within your Terror Radius for more than 10 seconds, Hide N' Seek will reveal the Survivor's aura for 10 seconds, also you get an Audio Cue.
Hide N' Seek cannot work on multiple Survivors at once.
Hide N' Seek goes on cooldown for 40/35/30 seconds.
"What's the matter, are you scared?..." - "Resurrected Solider"
ABNORMAL FLIP
After hooking a Survivor, Abnormal Flip activates for the next 35/40/45 seconds.
The next Generator you damage will be affected by Abnormal Flip.
Any Survivor that repairs affected Generator is repairing it with 300 % penalty.
Abnormal Flip can only affect one Generator at the time.
"My Place, My Game... My Rules." - "Resurrected Solider"
HEX: SECRETS UNLEASHED
A Hex that expose Survivor's fears.
When the Survivor loses a health state, other Survivors that were 24 metres away from that Survivor have their aura revealed for 10 seconds and they are inflicted with Exposed Status Effect for 20/25/30 seconds.
The Hex effects persist as long as the related Hex Totem is standing.
"You don't deserve to live..." - "Resurrected Solider"
New Survivor: Oliver Suzuki
Gender: Male
Role: Urban Explorer
Nationality: American with Japanese roots
Survivor Perks:
LIGHT STEPS
Your urban knowledge allows you to get out, even in sticky situations.
Your footstep sounds are 60/70/80 % silent.
Your Stagger duration is Decreased by 15 %.
"I know this place, do the same thing as me, okay?"- Oliver Suzuki
ANOTHER HAND FOR HELP
You don't imagine yourself leaving someone behind.
Each time you or other Survivor is hooked, you gain 1 Token:
Each Token Increases Healing and Unhooking speeds by 3/4/5 %, up to a maximum of 36/48/60 %.
For Each Survivor that is on hook, gain a 5 % Haste Status Effect.
"I'm too sensitive to leave you."- Oliver Suzuki
TIME TO SHINE
You don't give up till your last breath.
While getting chased for 40/35/30 seconds, Time To Shine activates.
When fast vaulting the window, the window gets blocked for the killer for 5 seconds.
"Maybe I lost everyone I loved, but I won't let you stand a chance, even for a bit."- Oliver Suzuki
The Lore will be added soon (maybe), if I'll have time.
Comments
I really love how much work you put into this its very detailed all the way down to add-on. Seems balance as well and I think it would be a good fit to the game
Thanks a lot, It took me like almost 2 days to make the killer drawing.
Light steps could use small buff like 55/70/85 % and additional effect: reduces grounds of pain by 10/15/20 %.
All of this is balanced as long as we don t consider nurse but lets hope she will get nerfed soon.
I Hope so.
Added the Power Icon and made minor changes to the Power itself
The perk drawings are really good, but the killer drawing looks really disproportionate.
You know that it's hard to draw a perfect human character, when you only have average drawing skills... I just used photos to make the killer's design, maybe that's why it looks somewhat weird for some. Im not upset or anything but sharing my thoughts, also thanks for sharing your opinion about it, that makes me somewhat glad.
Made Addon changes for:
54mm Bullet: Decreased the Rarity from Rare to Uncommon
Farmer Gloves: Decreases the time to charge up Boomerang throw by 30% (was 0.5 seconds)
Propaganda Poster: Changed to Santa Music Box
Family Painting: While in Storm, the Action speeds for breaking Breakable Walls and Pallets, damaging Generators, and vaulting Windows are Increased by 50%. Decreases the Duration of the Storm by 20 seconds.
Survivor visuals will be here tomorrow as well.
Just did Survivor's visuals, hope you like it.
(Imagine posting 3rd comment in a row)
Are the stains brown by any chance cause that def causes me grief
He tried to make it look like his face and right arm is closer than rest of body. But with out shadows it don't look good xp.
Probalby purple :)
After looking at the addons and power itself, I thought to myself: I think the power is a bit busted and some addons are weird. So I decided to Balance it out:
Boomerang now has 3 Tokens (was Infinite).
Calm Before Storm now works similiar to The Dredge's Nightfall (you needed to wait only 90 seconds to be ready to use).
Decreased the Homing Detection to 8 Metres (was 16 Metres).
Decreased the additional homing detection range of Strong Rope to 4 Metres (was 8 Metres).
Changed Farmer Gloves to Gun Sheath. (Farmer Gloves Decreased the time to charge up Boomerang throw by 30%).
Ripped Trachea now Increases the Duration of Storm by 20 Seconds (Increased the speed of the Boomerang Blade which travels while homing to survivors by 0.4 m/s).
Severed Hand now Reduces Reload time at Lockers by 25% (Increased the speed of the Boomerang Blade which travels while not homing to survivors by 1 m/s).
Decreased the Rarity of Opium Leftovers from Very Rare to Rare.
Increased the Rarity of Santa Music Box from Rare to Very Rare.
Step Runner now Increases the Passive Charge rate for Calm Before Storm by 75% per second. (Decreased the time to charge up Calm Before Storm by 30 seconds).