EvSummAlice
EvSummAlice
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@Hoodied said:
https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/comment/373275#Comment_373275
@EvSummAlice is that game even still alive?
Yes it is
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@projecteulogy said:
The game would then officially be banned in Russia and other countries because of the subject content.
Why? there's no suicide propaganda
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@TheNamedStranger said:
For what it's worth, not everyone's an A-1 writer, and don't worry about your English, I understood the perk well enough. The only thing I wasn't too clear on, appearances (not insanely important perhaps), and, how does she hit with the nails? Are they thrown? Does she have to switch from her knife to the nails? Just a little unsure is all. Overall, like I said not everyone's the best writer, the story did come off a little cliche and plain, but alas that could be fixed. Thank you for putting your ideas out here for us all to see!
appearance... shoulder length dark red hair and sad face mask with tears on it... wearing t-shirt with logo of metal band (Suicide Silence for example)
she hit with nails like the holden basic attack... she just use her left hand while that when right hand with knife just hide...
i also think that this music i made few years ago in one of VK apps can be suitable for her as the theme
Suicidal theme music.rar -
@Kong998 said:
overall idea... not great
Before I even have the chance to properly digest the story, i'm just being bombarded by some horrific spelling and grammatical mistakes: "Alice was crazy girl, she's got mental disease which forced her to commit suicide by veincutting in bathtub." do you not see the problem with this?
We already have killers in the game that enjoy the suffering of others, there is no need to go full edge lord and have a killer that makes people kill themselves.
Onto the actual review of what you created.
You haven't explained how this killer will "infect" the survivors.
The thing about making then stab themselves; how does this work? how long will it take to happen? will there be a warning where you can try and stop it from happening? does there need to be a certain level of "infected"?
The story; pretty awful. Doesn't actually tell us anything about the character. Doesn't give us her motivations. No substance.
Now onto perks
First of all, whats up with the names? "Inunderstandable Pain" "suicide silence" and "young blood" they are all horrific names, they sound like you are trying to be edgy. Also "inunderstandable" isn't a word, the closest thing to it is incomprehensible (it means not understandable).
The way the perks work if pretty horrific, like you get no terror radius if there are 2 people on a gen within 40 meters. Come the ######### on, you have to realize how bad that sounds. It's the exact same story with the other 2 perks.
The add-on's make no sense whatsoever, like "target hitted by nails bleeding for 15 seconds". 1st off it's hit not hitted. Second it makes no sense, you haven't explained what bleeding does, what do the nails do?
My overall thoughts on this where. It's bad but sure whatever idc. Then on the discord you are putting links in there, everyone is telling you it is bad, but you are refusing to listen and telling us to put it on here if we really think it's bad.
The whole crux of this is that she is some suicidal ######### that killed herself. You haven't used this as a plot device or for any real reason, you used this because you are either lazy or looking for attention. If you are dealing with depression don't spam our discord or boards about it. Go see a doctor or call a helpline (116 123).
srry m8, my english isn't perfect
i explained the way of infection... she hit survivor with her nails (m2 ability)... that how it's happening...
no motivation? m8 pls... i've mentioned in her story that she want to die and ready for everything to get it so she agreed to help entity... about whole story... srry m8, but for now can't make more...
k... i'll fix this... suicide silence is an easter egg to band with the same name... what 2 horrific about young blood? NOED not 2 spooky for ya?
if that perk 2 spooky for ya mayb then i should add a 60 sec's cooldown on it?
just as i said... nails are infecting survivors with hopelessness... bleeding... what sloppy butcher do? well... it's the same but w/out trauma effect...
i were listen to them... i just asked to repeat it there...
i used it because it first idea which came to my head... i don't spam bout it 2 much... also for my opinion there's no need to visit or call some1 for me personally..
hope i make it clear for u now m8...
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Fuse boxes? is that bloody Deceit reference?