New Killer Idea

I made this up while in the Shower and it's been in my head all day so I want to share it.

Summary:

Survivor turned Killer, BLANK (name doesn't matter) was a rebellious teenager who became known as "Pride" after he got suspended endlessly starting fights with Bullies and beating them brutally. After getting expelled because he attacked a Teacher with bad rumors surrounding him, he found himself thrown into the fog. His rebellious nature continued in the Realms, constantly mocking and insulting killers (so a toxic survivor) even if they couldn't understand him before one day slamming a pallet down so hard on a killer that their skull cracked, BLANK then proceeded to grab the killer's knife and stab him to death, feeling something change within himself. The Entity threw him into the void, seeming him as no longer useful. While in the void, he nearly went insane after merging with the first lost (past survivors who lost the will to live, and were thrown into the void). This caused it to gain a will, and The Sin gave it his nickname, "Pride" before deciding to become a poison that would kill the entity from within.


More Detail (for me since I'm the only one who cares):

Primary Power: Pride

Pride is The Sin's first ability and will be affected the most by his add-ons. By clicking the primary power, Pride will launch forward slightly and grab a survivor, however this distance is very limited and the survivor won't actually be injured, but instead will be stuck in place and have to mash out if grabbed. Where the trick comes in is that this ability can be charged up to go for longer distances. There's no real point in sending out Pride immediately as he'll only go about the range of a killer lunge. When charging up Pride, The Sin will show Pride wrapping around his left arm, before launching forward, The Sin will be slowed during this charge up sequence and will be temporarily stunned if Pride grabs nothing, as The Sin will have to calm him down Pride after he returns or if the killer cancels his power. Pride base-kit does not have any tracking abilities base-kit but will go around objects to continue moving forward (not through) until he reaches the distance he was charged up for. A land with Pride is almost always a free hit for The Sin,

Secondary Power: Lesser Lost

By using the abilities of the Lesser Lost who did not gain a will but are charmed by The Sin, the Sin will burst forwards in a dash where he cannot damage any survivors until he cancels it, during which he will have to calm the Lesser Lost. The ability can be used endlessly, but the longer The Sin is in the dash, the more agitated the Lesser Losts will get, making it harder to control as they start moving in their own directions. The less The Sin is in the dash, the quicker he will calm the Lesser Lost.

Add-ons:

Most of The Sin's add-ons will effect Pride. This can be whatever you want it to be except for the very rare and ultra rare add-ons. Each of them would represent one of the Seven Deadly Sins with the exception of one of the ultra rare add-ons which would allow The Sin to switch which one he was using throughout the match, but not Wrath. Wrath would be the other ultra rare that would damage a survivor when grabbed, at the cost of the max range being reduced, the charge time increased, or some other penalty. These would be other Lost's that were starting to gain a will, but be flawed in one way or another (all of these add-ons would have a con with the pro).

Appearance:

The Sin will be completely covered in clothing but completely unaffected by the Entity's alterations (as The Sin does not serve the Entity, more on that later). The clothing can be whatever you want it to be (the importance lies in that he's completely covered, as The Sin doesn't want be considered human) since he'll never exist but his mask was made out of his will changing the fog, same as his knife. His mask resembles the faces of The Lost but his knife is the same as the gift he was given, a decorative knife with the handle being shaped as a Lion's head and mane in a roar that leads to the blade.

More Detailed Backstory:

BLANK was rebellious in nature. If he didn't see something as right, he wouldn't stand for it. Throughout school he was always either in a fight or suspended because of one. Few saw that he was a good-natured person who simply couldn't solve anything without using his fists and many thought he was only looking for an excuse to fight. This continued till high school, by know BLANK was well-known throughout the school, but his nickname of "The Deadly Sin of Pride" wouldn't come to be known until he'd help a classmate by beating his attackers. That classmate would then go on to make him a decorative knife shaped as Lion's roar leading into the blade. The last straw would come when he beat one of his teacher's half-to-death after hearing of the rumors surrounding him. Before he could reach any legal trouble, the Entity would take interest in his strong emotions and lead him into the fog. There was were he truly shined, even with the new stakes, BLANK would still be protective, distracting the killer more often than actively working towards escape.

It changed drastically when a particularly smaller killer would remind him of the simpler days, where he could simply beat the hell out of the person causing the problem would fix it, and the rage that consumed him as he slammed the pallet down on the killer's head with newfound strength left a satisfying cracking sound. Without hesitation BLANK picked up the knife and proceeded to endlessly stab the killer. Seeing him as a failure, the entity would throw BLANK down into the void. There he would find his fate of insanity and despair, but as he was grabbed by a Lost, he instead merged with it. He nearly went mad in the process but found a new goal in the darkness. He threw away his old name and gave his new partner his old nickname, naming him "Pride" and himself "Sin." Sin felt it back in the trial, when he cracked open its skull, he felt as if he stole a tiny piece of something and grew stronger because of it, exactly as the Entity did to them. He called upon the other Lost, they couldn't merge with him like Pride did but they did come when he called to them. It would take some time, but these too would gain a will again, they wouldn't become anything resembling what they once were, but they could help him save the others. Gaining a new goal to kill the entity from within, The Sin thew away his humanity and decided to rule over the Lost. He would have to do horrible things in order to gain the strength to kill the Entity from within, but he'd do it, no matter how many centuries it'd take or how many survivors would lose their will to live and come to serve under him.

Misc:

The Sin's voice would be heavily distorted after merging with Pride. While it could be translated, it'd sound like gibberish at first. Some examples of what he'd say after hitting a survivor would be things like "Forgive me," "I promise, I will end this," "There will come a day when you can be free, so don't lose hope," "Even if you do, I'll give you new purpose." Pride can also speak but will only do so after grabbing a survivor, come up with the lines yourself. Also The Sin will have to calm down the Lesser Lost after successfully hitting a survivor, as their screams of pain would subconsciously remind them of the Trials, even if they've lost all memories.

Honestly I doubt anyone read this but thanks if you did, feel free to tell me it was too long, killer would be broken, story was cringe, etc. in the comments.

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